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cold silence by ~DecembersDemon:iconDecembersDemon:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Nature > Open




Ears ringing.
        Droplets falling.

One moment frozen.
        All is still.
        I'm breathing right?

Yes, that's right.
One breath in,
                   out,
                   in.

Ears ringing,
        so deafeningly silent.
        
         Droplets falling...
Staying true to their name.

          Cold. So cold.

I'm breathing right?
                In.
Out.
               All is quiet.
Ugh......so quiet.

And then...................
a flash of light.
I tense.
          Cringe......expecting.
Wait?
No thu-
BOOM
.
..
...
Nevermind.
Ears ringing.
So cold.

cold.
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Author's Comments

okay. number 15 for silence.
It was raining today, and I got the idea.

I'll look again, and if theres a rain theme, I'll put it there instead.
Sheesh, this is so funnn.

:w00t:


UPDATE:
This is now #30 instead of #15

Comments


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=VanHelsingFreak Oct 6, 2007, 6:32:53 PM
That's good!

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MY VAGINA IS GLOWING!
:icondecembersdemon:
~DecembersDemon Oct 6, 2007, 7:47:49 PM
heehee thank you!

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why, team Emmet of course.
:iconshadow-mantis:
~Shadow-Mantis Oct 6, 2007, 11:53:47 PM
This is awesome! The style is unique, as it works so well as poetry but could pretty much be normal thoughts. And I'm not sure I've ever seen "Ugh" used in a poem before ^_^

Congrats, and take a favourite.

--
Just make-believe.
:iconsahkmet:
*Sahkmet Oct 7, 2007, 6:58:57 AM
:clap: You wrote it so...so...It's hard to describe but it makes it seem...real...

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Mood: :plotting:
Reading: 100 vampire stories.:fuzzydemon:
Writing: S.W.A.N. :evileye:
Need to draw: 3. :nana:
Loves: Vampires, dragons, Roxula, and Yes[link]
:iconvanhelsingfreak:
=VanHelsingFreak Oct 7, 2007, 7:01:16 AM
You're Welcome

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MY VAGINA IS GLOWING!
:icondecembersdemon:
~DecembersDemon Oct 7, 2007, 9:20:47 AM
:boogie:

EEEEEEE!!!!!
I am so totally saying that out loud!
heehee.
thank you!
HOLy Potatoes!
that makes me so happy.
:w00t:

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why, team Emmet of course.
:icondecembersdemon:
~DecembersDemon Oct 7, 2007, 9:21:10 AM
*faints*
:boogie:
thank you so much!
:love:

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why, team Emmet of course.
:iconkingjames187:
~kingjames187 Oct 7, 2007, 12:09:07 PM
I really like the idea of deafening silence. I myself am driven insane in complete silence. So I learned to whistle Beethoven’s symphonies. While that dose not make me look less insane it dose wonders for my peace of mind.

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“It is only after we’ve lost everything that we are free to do anything”
Tyler Durden “Fight club”

“He who makes a beast of himself gets rid of the pain of being a man.”
Dr. Johnson “Fear and loathing in Las Vegas.”
:iconblue-strawberry:
~blue-strawberry Oct 7, 2007, 12:58:48 PM
wowie *highpitched noises*
I think the poetry suits you:)

--
You have four nostrils, just to let you know.
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